2. Feedback Most the feedback form my previous pitch was positive, with only minor tweaks. They liked the content and the flow, with the exception of my conclusion. I also wore a Star Wars shirt that some people appreciated, but suggested I switch to some more professional attire. They also asked that I explain a little more about the advertisements.
3. Changed I changed my shirt and modified the end of my speech to add a better end and a little more info.
While I have not watched your other two pitches, you seemed to have a lot of confidence in your idea and your hand gestures helped emphasize your pitch. The only suggestion I would make is to speak a little more clearly and annunciate your words better, it was a little bit hard to understand you at some points. Otherwise, awesome job!
ReplyDeleteMesh networking is a great idea for a place like UF, were there are a ton of devices already on the network. I know it can be frustrating when going between buildings and having your phone stop loading while it switches from WiFi to LTE constantly. Your pitch was good and you came off as confident and well spoken.
ReplyDeleteOk so I'm not really into technology like that but what I can gather of your pitch it sounds great. Especially the idea of using advertising to pay for the service. As a college student we need to save as much money as possible and not having to pay for something we need will automatically make it more appealing to the student. This is great
ReplyDeleteCheck out mine: http://bridgettdavis85.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3-week10.html?m=1
Hi Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate you standing back from the camera! Using your hands, and addressing me as if I were in the room. I haven’t watched your last pitch, but I get the feeling it was probably also very clear and you probably didn’t have to fix much. I see you “changed your shirt” which made me laugh! Not laugh at you, laugh with you. Here is my post:
http://rileyent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html