1. Pitch
2. Feedback Reflection I thought the feedback I got on the last elevator pitch was mostly accurate. They said I was being a bit to technical.
3. Change I did my best to turn down the amount of technical information, and explain any terms I did use.
Matthew I liked how you didn't memorize your pitch and how you spoke in a way that anyone could understand your product. I could tell that you were a little tense, but that is normal. The honest suggestion I would make next time is to choose a different shirt. I like the shirt, Star Wars is awesome, but it is a little distracting. Great job and I hope you can get this product out in the market. Please check out my blog http://soulstosteal.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDelete-Chris
Hey Matthew, this is a pretty cool idea. I get kicked off the wifi all the time and it's really frustrating. I was really impressed with your elevator pitch. Everything flowed naturally and was convincing. Only thing I could suggest would be to make it longer. Elevator pitches are supposed to be around 60 seconds so you have a bit of room to work with. Maybe just a concluding sentence or two that goes over what this is going to solve or something. Feel free to check out my idea for a textbook exchange app called TextSwap here: http://matthewent3003.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Matthew! Starting off your pitch with relatable examples introduced your idea very well. I did not watch your first pitch but I can agree that the terms you used were easy to understand and follow. The only thing I suggest is adding a concluding phrase to summarize the concept and name of your product to be memorable. Great idea and best of luck!
ReplyDeleteI would love your feedback on my pitch if you get the chance!
http://andreasentspace.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
-Andrea
Hey Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI agree UF Wifi is a blessing and a curse. It has definitely failed me a time or two in the past. While it is frustrating, I am pretty satisfied with the speed of the network most days. I think your idea could benefit people in apartment complexs with weaker wifi networks. This is actually an issue I currently face living in an apartment. I think you should clarify a bit more the role of advertisements in your product because this could be unattractive to some customers. Check out my blog post if you find the time! http://josetheentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Matthew,
ReplyDeleteYou pitch your idea quite naturally and guide the listener along with ease. Regarding your idea, I can see the potential market as strong WiFi is currently in high demand. Addressing your physical pitch, while you are a great speaker I believe recording your pitch in professional attire while make it even that much better. Although I appreciate the Star Wars love, people are more likely to buy your idea if you present yourself professionally.
I have attached the link to my pitch and would appreciate your feedback and input.
http://dipaoloent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Best of Luck,
Louis DiPaolo Jr